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Megaman Starforce Time Collision

Post by Yandols » Sat Jul 31, 2010 8:56 pm

Megaman Starforce Time Collision.
A Megaman Starforce fanfic that was suppose to be a fan-game.
Written by Yandols ZeonX.

Chapter 0 - Description

Hello, I'm System and I am the narrator for this fanfic. Yandols originally wanted to make a Megaman
Starforce fan-game but stopped half-way because he doesn't have enough futuristic resources. So in
conclusion, me and Yandols decided to turned it into a fanfic instead. The timeline takes place in
between RnR2 and RnR3, so some stuff from RnR2 and RnR3 will be available throughout the gam-uh I mean
story. Don't take the fanfic too seriously as it has also some funny parts, we all need some comedy,
rights? Anyways, the fanfic is about to begin, so if you want to know some a bit more of information
about me (System) just look up my name on the Rocknarok Wikia. Yandols should have added an entry about
me on the Wikia. So, Lets begin!

Chapter 1
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Chapter 1 - Prologue

Location: Unknown -- Domain: Unknown -- Year: 200X


In somewhere that looks like a top of a building, a man in red clothing can be seen through default view,
looking away from the camera (you know, RnR camera). Then some sort of demon with wings entered the
visible view of the camera and walked towards the man in red. The demon speaks.

Demon: Hey!

An exclamation mark appeared above the man's head. The man in red turns towards the demon, allowing a
visual of the man, he has a scar on his right eye and looks like he's in his 40's. He then replies the
demon,

???: Oh, Hey Armos!

Armos (the demon) looks around the surrounding and then begins a conversation.

Armos: I see you've cleared the place up.

???: Yup, I'm all packed up and ready to go.

Armos: So you really are moving... But where to?

???: I'm heading... to the year 220X.

After a few seconds of hearing that, Armos jumps (visually) in surprise and continues the conversation.

Armos: 2-220X!?!?

Armos: But its only the year 200X!! You're going to about 200 years into the future!?

???: Exactly. The year 220X is my destination.

Armos: But... but... how is it even possible to travel through time!?

???: Heh. Follow me, and I'll show you.

Armos: .....

The man in red takes 4 steps to the left, 6 steps up, 4 steps to the right, and 2 more steps up. A "..."
icon appeared above Armos' head for 1.25 seconds and then he follows the man in red. The camera then pans
towards where they currently are and Armos continues the conversation with,

Armos: .....

Armos: I don't see anything... besides the stars of course.

???: Heh, Watch this!

The screen flashes for a short moment and then an orb appeared out of nowhere in the middle of the sky.

Armos: W-What is that!?

???: This my friend, is the Time Orb. I found this about a week ago, during that time, I studied this orb
and found out that it has an amazing power.

???: He who possesses this orb, can travel across time.

An exclamation mark appears above Armos' head and he turns towards the man in red.

Armos: But... you might alter the space-time continumm and cause a time paradox!

???: That is the least of my worries.

Armos: .....

Armos turns back towards the sky and the man in red continues.

???: I learnt from the orb, that the year 220X is very interesting. Especially with the technology they have.

???: I am also aware that I might cause a time paradox when I go to that year. But it is more intersting
to see what kind of time paradoxes can occur because of me.

Armos turns towards the man in red and asks,

Armos: So you are going to change the future?

The man in red turns towards Armos and replies,

???: Not exactly, but possibly.

???: If you want to, you can come along with me.

Both of them then turns towards the sky,

Armos: .....

Armos: I dunno... But I would also like to see how the future looks like.

???: If you want to follow, then go home and pack your stuff! I'm leaving for the future in a few hours.

???: I'm heading to the Inn for awhile. In the meantime, think about it, Armos.

The man in red then slowly walks away from the visible view of the camera and exits the map. Armos then
turns towards the sky and looks at the Time Orb. The music fades out and the screen turns black for a few
seconds.


Location: Vista Point, Echo Ridge -- Domain: Starforce -- Year: 220X (Present Year)


Visible view of the camera is showing the blue sky, after a few seconds the camera pans down towards the
ground and 2 characters can be seen. One of them is a girl and the other a boy, the boy starts speaking.

???: Sigh....

The female character turns towards the male character showing a question mark above the head and asks,

???: What is it Geo?

Geo: Ah nothing, Crossia. I just....

Geo: I wonder when will Omega-Xis return.

Crossia: He's on an important mission, and he'll need to be away for quite some time. Don't worry, he
will be back soon.

Geo: Sigh....

Geo: I miss Omega-Xis...

Crossia: I miss him too, but we have to deal with it for now.

Crossia: Until then, he's putten me in-charge of protecting and aiding you.

Geo: Yeah, at least he didn't left me alone.

Crossia: Isn't it sad to be alone all the time?

Geo: Uhuh.

Geo: I was all alone, until Omega-Xis came and changed my life.

Crossia: Well cheer up! You're still not alone now even though Omega-Xis is away.

Crossia: And besides, isn't there something that you needed to do today?

Geo: Oh yeah, but what was it again?

Crossia: I dun remember very much as well, but I think it has something to do with our house.

Geo: The house huh? Alright then. Let's go home!

The screen fades out and after a second or two, it fades in again. Geo exits from Vista Point into
Echo Ridge, and walks towards his house. But before they crossed the road towards Geo's house, Crossia
stopped Geo and said,

Crossia: Uh Oh!

A question mark appeared above Geo's head and Geo asked,

Geo: What is it Crossia?

Crossia: I feel it....

Crossia: Something... is calling me...

Crossia: Take the wave liner and bring me to AR Road nao!

Geo: Uh... Okay...

After hearing what Crossia said, Geo heads towards the wave liner and took the ride to AR Road.

The screen fades out, and fades in again showing a new area which I have never seen in any of the RnR
games. The music begins playing and the wave liner arrives at the location.


Location: AR Road -- Domain: Starforce -- Year: Present Year


Geo exits the wave liner and can be seen from the visible view of the camera, he then speaks.

Geo: AR Road... Its been a long time since I came here.

Crossia: This frequency! I must find out more about it!

Crossia: Its coming from the east! Follow it Geo!!

Oh yeah, I forgot to say that the area that they are currently at is a mountainous area. So then, Geo
starts walking around the place and finds the way to the source of the frequency. However, while they
are going through the area, they came across a huge boulder blocking the only way through.

Geo: Argh! A huge rock is blocking the way!

Crossia: Oh! Don't worry, we can walk right through these kind of rocks while we are wave changed.

Crossia: You do remember how to wave change right? Just press the R button to Wave Change.

Geo: Yeah I remember, and shout "EM WAVE CHANGE, ON AIR!" right?

Crossia: Yeah, but I don't think shouting that is nessesarry anymore.

Geo: Huh? Why?

Crossia: Don't ask me, ask the author, he wrote this fanfic not me.

Geo: O... kay....

Crossia: Oh yeah! Remember, you can't change back right after you wave changed. You need to wait at least
a few minutes to be able to wave change again.

Geo: Oh, thats new...

So Geo pressed the R button and EM Wave Changed to Crossia form. Why not Megaman? Well its obvious,
Omega-Xis isn't here remember? So he can't wave change into Megaman, he wave changes into Crossia form
instead, though I never seen a boy merged with a female wizard before, thats new. Anyways, after Geo
wave changes, he walks right through the huge boulder like he was a ghost!

Geo: Well, that was easy enough. Now lets move on.

Crossia: Right! Lets go track that frequency!

With that problem solved, they moved on to the next map. But when they arrived to the middle of the next
map, Geo notices a split path!

Geo: Oh noez! A split path! What nao?

Crossia: Hmm.... My senses tell me that we should go through the left path.

Geo: Head left?

Crossia: I guess so.

Geo: Alright then, if we run into a dead end or something we can turn back right?

Crossia: Of course.

And so our hero(es) heads towards the right path in the split.

Geo: Left! not right!

Opps, sorry, I mean the left path in the split. While walking through the mountainous area, they
encountered a virus. Which is a Metteur.

Geo: OMGWTFBBQ A M3TT00RZ!!!! HOLY ****!!!!

Crossia: What are you so surprised about!?

Geo: I was just adding suspense to the story.

Crossia: ....

Crossia: Anyways, we gotta delete this metteur quick, its blocking our way!

Geo: Right! BATTLE CARD!! PREDATION!!

Geo takes out a battle card to get rid of the virus.

Geo: HEAVYCANNON!!

The metteur instantly gets deleted after being hit by heavy blast of the HeavyCannon.

Crossia: Is it actually necessary for you to use a HeavyCannon? Its just a noob metteur. The simple
Cannon battle card can already get rid of it.

Geo: Sorry, it was the closest battle card to my hand in the pocket.

Crossia: ....

Crossia: Whatever, we need to the move on.

So they continued walking through AR Road, and another virus appeared, this time there were two
metteurs. Lets see what Geo and Crossia does.

Crossia: More viruses!

Geo: Oh! Lets see now....... BATTLE CARD!! PREDATION!!

Geo takes out a battle card from his pocket and then attacks one of the metteurs.

Geo: LONGSWORD!!

Geo slices one of the metteurs with his LongSword, instantly deleting it. However...

Geo: Oh Yeah!!

Crossia: Look out Geo!!

Geo: Huh!?

Geo forgot about the second metteur and got attacked by it and lost 10 HP.

Geo: Argh!

Crossia: You need to concentrate Geo! Have you not battled for that long till you get all cocky after
defeating a mere metteur?

Geo: Uh, no, I just uh got caught off guard.

Crossia: Right... Anyways its your turn, take out another battle card.

Geo: Alright, BATTLE CARD!! PREDATION!! CANNON!!

Geo aims the Metteur and shoots his Cannon when the virus stopped moving. The blast of the Cannon deleted
the Metteur. Battle Won!

Crossia: Heh, Celebration?

Geo: I guess so! :D

Crossia: WRONG!! We still need to track that frequency!

Geo: Oh yeah I almost forgot! :O

Geo and Crossia moves on through the path they taken and after awhile, they reached a cliff.

Geo: A dead end! D:

Crossia: Hey kid, look up!

Geo: Up? Oh!

Geo looks up and sees the Wave Road around the cliff.

Geo: I forgot about that, eheheh.

Crossia: .... Anyways, see any way we can get to it?

Geo: Hmm.... Lets see.... .... ... .. Ah!! Over there!

Geo spots an area which he can use to jump onto the Wave Road. They head to that area and jumps onto the
Wave Road. And then started walking up the cliff through the Wave Road. After a few minutes of walking,
they finally reached the top of the cliff.

Geo: We're here! On top of teh cliff.

Crossia: Apparently its not over yet. We still haven't reached our destination.

Geo: Uh what?

Crossia: Look down, kid.

Geo: .... After all the climbing we need to go down now? -__-

Crossia: Yes, you must!!

So they go down the cliff, with Geo looking unhappy. Cheer up Geo!

Geo: ....

.... Nvm. So then, Geo and Crossia continues their journey down the mountain, into another straight path.
After they got down the mountain, they continue walking through the straight path that I said earlier.

Geo: Hey Crossia, do you really think there is something out of the ordinary at the destination?

Crossia: Of course, otherwise why did we even come here in the first place?

Geo: Maybe you just want me to exercise because I've only been staying at Echo Ridge the entire time?

Crossia: .... I didn't say that.

Geo: .... Nvm.

They are now reaching their destination.

Crossia: The signal of the frequency is getting stronger! We've gotta be close!

So then, after some 5 minutes walk through the straight path, they've reached where they were supposed to
go, a large square empty space possibly equal size to an EM Wave Space from RnR2 but smaller. But....

Crossia: This is it! This is where the frequency is coming from.

Geo looks around.

Geo: I see absolutely nothing, besides the mountain and cliffs of course.

Geo: Are you sure this is the spot?

Crossia: Yes! This is! Just look at what your Hunter says!

Geo: Oh you're right. But.... there ain't anything here.

The hunter starts beeping.

Geo: Hey! Wait! The frequency!

The hunter continues beeping faster.

Crossia: Its getting stronger!? What's going on?

The hunter's beep keeps getting faster and faster.

Geo: What!? Whats going on!?

The hunter's beep suddenly turned into a WARNING. Crisis music begins playing.

Crossia: GEO LOOK OUT!!

Geo: !!????

The screen fades out in white, music also fades out, then the screen fades out to black. And I have no idea
what just happened.


---To be continued---

Chapter 2
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Chapter 2 - The Arrival

Location: Space-Time Continuum Time Warp -- Domain: Unknown -- Year: Unknown


Previously on Megaman Starforce Time Collision, Geo and Crossia went to the mountainous AR Road, they
went through quite a little bit to get to their destination. But when they got there, they see absolutely
nothing but they pick up the strong frequency from that location where they are. The hunter beeped faster
and faster to show how strong the frequency is, but turned into a Warning and the screen faded out. And
now back to the story...

The screen slowly fades from white, showing an area with swirly background like the Windows Media Player's
visualizations. After a few seconds, music 'RTRZ_-_04_-_Captive_Legend.mp3' fades in and the camera slowly
pans downwards then showing Geo unconscious. Crossia appears and tries to wake Geo up.

Crossia: eo... Geo..!

Geo: .........

Crossia: GEO!! WAKE UP!!

Geo: ........uh...

Crossia: WAKE UP GEOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Geo: ...!!!

Geo slowly opens his eyes wakes up, finding himself floating in mid-air in this never-before seen area.
Then speaks to Crossia.

Geo: Wwh.. What!? What happened??

Crossia: You finally woke up, you fainted, I guess you're okay now.

Geo: Okay, but more importantly, where in the world are we!?

Crossia: That, I do not know...

Geo takes a better look around the place, and continues the conversation.

Geo: What the heck? This place looks like Windows Media Player!!

Crossia: LOL, you still use that!?

Geo: Well yeah, IMO I like that player because its easier to manage my song files, playlists and stuff...

Crossia: Isn't the default player included with DION-OS already good enough for that?

Geo: I like Windows Media Player better...

*Ahem* I'm sorry to interrupt your conversation about Windows Media Player, but aren't there more important
things that you should be discussing about?

Geo: Oh right! Sorry!

Geo: Anyways, where are we?

Crossia: I'm afraid that I have no idea where we are. But there are absolutely no EM Waves here.

Geo: WHAT!? Seriously there are no EM Waves here!?

Crossia: 0%

Geo: Wow. Thats... odd.

Crossia: So lets recap, Geo, do you remember anything you saw before you faint?

Geo: Hmm... No. But the last thing I remembered is that the hunter showed a Warning.

Geo: .... THE HUNTER!!

Geo immediately checks the hunter if it analyzed anything before the white-out. Unfortunately...

Geo: What!? Limited Power Supply (LPS) Mode? But I charged it this morning!

Crossia: Its got nothing to do with the battery life.

Geo: Then why is the hunter running on LPS mode?

Crossia: The reason is obvious isn't it? There aren't any EM Waves here.

Geo: Oh yeah. No wonder the hunter can't function properly.

Crossia: Exactry.

Geo: Now back to the main topic, where the heck are we and how are we going to get out of here!?

A voice from a short distance away was heard.

???: I believe I can answer that.

2 figures in completely black appeared out of nowhere and walked into visible view of the camera and
continued Geo's conversation.

Geo: What the hell!? Who or what are you!?

Crossia: Careful Geo! It doesn't have any EM frequency so I can't identify what it is.

???: At ease, we are not hostile.

Geo: Hmm?

The two black figures revealed themselves and introduced themselves to Geo and Crossia. Turns out that
they are the two characters from beginning of the story.

???: I am Jakiro. And this is Armos.

Armos: We come in peace.

So the name of the man in red is Jakiro, why didn't he revealed it in the first chapter? Hmm... I should
ask Yandols. Anyways, moving on...

Crossia: Alright... How do we know if we can trust you?

Jakiro: Do we look like people that can harm someone to you?

Crossia: Not really, but you two are suspicious.

Jakiro: Well, you don't need to worry, we're friendly. I can assure you that.

Geo: Hmm...

Geo takes a closer look at Armos and asks.

Geo: Thats a very unique wizard you got there Jakiro.

Jakiro: Wizard?

Armos: Whats that?

Geo: Wait, you mean Armos is not your Wizard?

Armos: Uh... no? I'm not some kind of this wizard or whatever.

Jakiro: What is a wizard anyway?

Geo: Uh... I'll have to get back to you on that.

Armos: Alright then.

Crossia: Hey! Aren't we suppose to discuss about more important matters? Like where the hell are we!?

Jakiro: Oh of course. I would like to explain it to you.

Geo: Take your time.

Everyone looks towards Jakiro while he begins to start the explanation.

Jakiro: Alright, this area where we all are currently in, is called the Space-Time Continuum Time Warp.

Geo: The Space Time con what?

Jakiro: Lets put it this way, simply said, its like a border between one country and another, but this isn't
countries that we are crossing over to, its time.

Jakiro: This is a border between time, and we are currently in it.

Crossia: Wait what? Time? But how and why are we in this space-time thingy anyway?

Jakiro: Why you two are in here, the reason I don't know. But yes, this time warp is caused by me. But I
didn't expect to end up in a time warp.

Geo: What? Uh... Can you be less specific please, we can't understand much you said.

Jakiro: Alright. Since we should ally with you two, I'll explain everything.

Crossia: Okay.

Jakiro: I found an orb called the Time Orb about a week ago, and I found out that it has the power to allow
its user to travel across time.

Jakiro: Armos and I decided to travel to your time to do some research.

Geo: Time travel!? Whoa. But, won't that cause a paradox or something?

Armos: Thats what I told him before we began the time shift.

Jakiro: Yes, paradoxes may occur, but I'm sure that it isn't much of a problem. This space-time continuum
time warp is a result of an unsuccessful time shift.

Crossia: What do you exactly mean by unsuccessful?

Jakiro: Something or someone interfered the time shift somehow, which messed up our destination. We were
suppose to land somewhere in the year 220X, which is your year.

Geo: Yep, 220X is our year. So... what year are we in?

Jakiro: To be honest, I don't know. But I'm sure that it won't be good if we stay here for too long.

Geo: Okay, but how do we get out of here?

Armos: I'm guessing with the Time Orb?

Jakiro: Exactly, but the Time Orb's power is currently depleted. We need a source of energy to be able to
make another time shift.

Geo: Hmm...

Geo: Ah I know!

Jakiro: Hmm?

Geo: The Hunter!

Jakiro: The Hunter?

Geo: Its a device of ours, does the Time Orb accept electric energy?

Jakiro: I'm not sure, but it should be able to.

Crossia: Alright then, lets try charging that orb up with the Hunter.

Geo: Yeah! Lets do it!... uh. But, what happens if we fail?

Jakiro: Then we need to find another power source before its too late.

Geo: Too late?

Jakiro: If we stay in this time warp for too long, we will be automatically warped to a random time. And
I'm pretty sure that none of us wants that to happen.

Crossia: A random time? Wow, that doesn't sound too pleasant.

Jakiro: Exactly, which is why we must try to power the orb up.

Geo takes the Hunter out and attaches a cable to the charger port of the Hunter and points the other end of
the cable towards the Time Orb.

Jakiro: Now, everyone please get closer to the orb, we don't want to be seperated into different time periods.

Jakiro takes the other end of Geo's cable and puts it over the Time Orb. The music stops playing and a few
seconds later, the soundtrack 'RnR 2 - 26 - Ride On.mp3' fades in. Geo initiates the power transfer sequence
and the Time Orb begins to glow. Electricity can be seen going out of the end of the cable and into the Time
Orb. After a few minutes of charging the Time Orb with Electricty, the Hunter's status on screen goes from
Limited Power Supply Mode to Blank.

Crossia: Its glowing brightly!

Jakiro: Yes, it worked! Please stand by, I am beginning the time shift.

3 seconds later... the music fades out and there is a swirling effect on the screen (Yuri's Revenge Time
Travel Effect) along with its sound effect. Some seconds later, the swirling effect fades out and Echo
Ridge music (RnR2) fades in. The 4 of them have arrived at Geo's present time.


Location: Echo Ridge Outskirts -- Domain: Starforce -- Year: 220X


Jakiro: We did it, the time shift was a success. The Time Orb indicates that we are in the year 220X.

Geo: Yes, this is the way to Echo Ridge.

Armos: Echo Ridge? This a place of yours?

Geo: Yep, its the town where we live in.

Armos: I see.

Geo: Lets go in.

Crossia: Yeah!


Location: Echo Ridge -- Domain: Starforce -- Year: 220X


And so, the 4 time travellers (including Geo and Crossia) have returned to Echo Ridge. Well then, let the
story continue.

Geo: Here we are. Echo Ridge!

Jakiro: Is there an Inn that we can stay in? We would really like to settle in first.

Geo: Oh yes of course, just turn right from here, go straight up and then turn left and that building is
the Inn.

Jakiro: Alright, thanks. If you have anymore questions we'll be there.

Geo: See ya.

Crossia: Yeah see ya guys later.

Jakiro and Armos walked away from visible view of the camera. Luna suddenly showed up from the opposite
direction and began talking to Geo.

Luna: GEO!!

Crossia: Hey kid, it looks like your girlfriend is coming.

Geo: SHUT UP!! SHE'S NOT MY GIRLFRIEND!!

Crossia: Okay... :3

Geo: Oh heya Luna!

Luna: Where have you been!? I've been looking all over for you and I wasn't able to reach you through the
Hunter Network!

Geo: Oh I'm sorry, my Hunter was out of batteries.

Luna: Completely? Wow what on earth have you been doing?

Geo: Uh... Some kind of experiment that involved draining the battery of the Hunter.

Luna: Oh, alright then. As long as you're safe. You don't know how worried I was!

Geo: Why? I've only been gone for about an hour.

Luna: What are you talking about!? I've been trying to find you since yesterday!

Geo: Ye-Yesterday!?!?

Crossia: It looks like we skipped a day, Geo.

Geo: Seems so.

Luna: What did you say?

Geo: Oh nothing, I was just talking to Crossia.

Luna: Which reminds me, Crossia, why don't you come out this time? Don't you always reveal yourself when
Geo is talking to me?

Crossia reveals herself.

Crossia: Lol, here I am.

Luna: Too late I'm afraid, my conversation with Geo is just about to finish.

Crossia: LOL!

Geo: Uh, so Luna, what did I miss while I was gone?

Luna: Are you kidding? Misora came by to visit you yesterday but you were nowhere to be found!

Geo: Ooh!

Luna: Plus, your mom is also worried about you, you should go home and tell her that you're okay.

Geo: Right. Come Crossia, lets go home.

Crossia: Roger.

Luna: Geo, Wait!

Geo: ?

Luna runs up to Geo and hugs him. Geo immediately blushes and felt embarrased to be hugged in public,
especially by Luna. Luna then lets go of Geo and heads home.

Luna: See ya later, Geo~!

Geo: Oh, alright, later!

Luna then runs away from visible view of the camera, and then Crossia says to Geo...

Crossia: *ahem* Geo and Luna, sitting in a tree, kis-

Geo: SHUT THE FUCK UP!!

Geo's face turns all red and looks towards the ground.

Crossia: Lol, you didn't need to use the F word you know, its bad.

Geo: Uh, okay, sorry, lets go home!

Crossia: Right lets go! Mom must be worried sick about you.

Geo: *gulp* What excuse am I suppose to give this time...

Crossia: I dunno, but it has to be a very VERY good one.

---To be continued---

Chapter 3
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Chapter 3 - Deja Vu

Location: Geo's House -- Domain: Starforce -- Year: 220X -- BGM: 'RnR 1 - 03 - Familiar Indoors.mp3'


Previously on Megaman Starforce Time Collision, Geo and Crossia somehow fell into a Time Warp and met two
friendly characters while in the Time Warp. When they got back to Echo Ridge, they found out that they have
somehow skipped 1 day of time. Geo is now on his way back to his house with Crossia, which brings us back
to the story...

Geo: Mom! I'm home!

Geo arrives at the living room and saw his mom in a very unhappy mood.

Geo: Mom?

Geo's mother looks towards Geo and starts questioning him.

Hope: GEO!! WHERE THE HECK HAVE YOU BEEN!?

Geo: Uh... Well... you see...

Hope: Did you know I was so worried about you? Are you alright? Did anything happen to you?

Geo: No mom, I'm fine, really. I'm sorry I didn't come home last night.

Geo's mother sighes in relief that Geo is alright.

Hope: Well, I'm just glad that you are alright. But where have you been to?

Geo: Uh... Me and Crossia went to AR Road to find something.

Hope: AR Road? That old place? But why? And what is that you two were looking for?

Crossia whispers to Geo, and Geo whispers back to Crossia.

Crossia: Man, your mom really is asking many questions.

Geo: Uhuh, help me out abit would you?

Hope: Well?

Geo: Oh, we were... uh... oh, we were looking for this orb!

Hope: An Orb?

Geo: Yeah! Yeah! We were looking for this orb at AR Road because uh... Crossia needed it for uh...

Crossia: The EMOP process.

Hope: The what process?

Crossia: EMOP, Electromagnetic Outburst Prevention Process. Its a process that prevents us EM beings
from getting harmed by JAM Waves that may cause us to lose soul concentration and go berserk.

Geo: Uhh... yeah, that.

Hope: Well, I dunno what this mumbo-jumbo is all about but as long as you are safe, I don't need to worry.

Hope: Geo, please stay safe.

Geo: I will mom, and again, I'm sorry.

Hope: Well now, you two head into your room. Dinner will be ready in an hour, and Geo please take a bath.

Geo: Alright mom.

Geo's mother walks away into the kitchen. Geo sighes in relief that he didn't get literally pwned. Crossia
then fully appears right next to Geo and they began talking.

Geo: Phew I'm glad that worked.

Crossia: At least I thought up of that EMOP thingy as an excuse for us being at AR Road.

Geo: But Crossia, does that EMOP Process really exist?

Crossia: Yes, i think.

Geo: You think?

Crossia: Omega-Xis once told me about it, but I think it only applies to AM-ians like him. Since I'm an
FM-ian, I'm not sure if that EMOP thingy applies to me, I never thought about it before.

Geo: Hmm...

Geo's mother suddenly shouts from the kitchen to Geo.

Hope: GEO!! Have you taken that bath yet!?

Geo: Argh! I'm on in mom!!


Location: Geo's Room -- Domain: Starforce -- Year: 220X -- BGM: 'RnR 1 - 03 - Familiar Indoors.mp3'


Geo enters his room with a towel around his body, and his hair all wet. Obviously Geo just finished his bath.

Geo: Ahh! I feel completely refreshed!

Crossia: Took you long enough, Geo.

Geo: What?

Crossia: You bathe for 37 seconds longer than usual.

Geo: Very funny, Crossia.

Crossia: Well, you DID bathe longer than usual.

Geo: Its only a few seconds difference!

Crossia: 37 seconds difference.

Geo: Ah whatever, anyways is there anything that we need to do right now?

Crossia: Hmm... I don't think so.

Geo: Really? Im sure that there was something I was suppose to do...

Crossia: Like putting on your clothes?

Geo: Oh yeah, I need to do that too, and I better!

Crossia: Yeah, we don't want Luna to enter your room and find you half naked.

Geo: Lol.

Crossia: Since when do you say Lol?

Geo: I dunno, you keep saying it, so I'm trying it out.

Crossia: It doesn't seem to fit you.

Geo: Uhuh, and I know. Now to get my clothes...

Geo was on his way to his cabinet to get his usual clothes, but then. Luna opens the door and comes
in all of the sudden.

Luna: Geo~!

Crossia: Speak of the devil.

Geo: Ah! Luna! Uh...

Luna: .........

Luna sees Geo clothless and her face turns all red, she backs up from Geo's room and walks away towards
the living room.

Luna: I'm sorry to interrupt whatever it is you're doing! I'll be in the living room!

Geo: Luna! Wait! This isn't-

*Pook!* Geo slammed into the door as Luna closes it.

Geo: Owwww. That hurt.

Crossia: I'll get the first-aid kit!

Geo: Very funny, Crossia.

Crossia pushes Geo and tells him,

Crossia: Well then, off you go!

Geo: Go where?

Crossia: To put on your clothes of course!

Geo: Oh right! Of course!

Crossia: While you do that, I'll get Luna to come back up here.

Geo: Oh alright.

Crossia walked out of Geo's room and gets Luna. Geo takes off his towel and puts on his clothes, after
he done that, he dried his hair with his towel and then shakes his hair around Justin Bieber style.
LOL I know! Its epic win for Geo to do that. Anyways, after doing that, he sets up his usual hair and
puts his visualiser on his head and sits down on his chair, waiting for Luna and Crossia to come in.

Geo: Hello ladies!

Crossia: Trying out a new type of speech?

Geo: Kinda...

Crossia: Well it ain't working!

Geo: Awh.

Crossia: Well, I brought Luna back like I told you I would.

Luna: Hai Geo~

Geo: Hello.

Crossia: So what is it that you wanted to look for Geo?

Luna: Oh, nothing much. I just wanted to make sure that Geo is perfectly okay and back at his home.

Geo: Well, you don't need to worry. I'm perfetcly fine!

Crossia: Its perfectly, not perfetcly.

Geo: Opps!

Luna: You disappeared for one day and your english rusted abit!

Geo: It was just a mistake! I should blame the writer of this fanfic for making that typo!

Luna: Writer-what?

Geo: Oh nothing, forget what I just said.

Luna: ....Right....

Geo: Well, is there anything else you wanted to say to me?

Luna blushed as she wanted to say something to Geo but doesn't have the guts to say it yet.

Geo: Luna?

Luna: OH! No! Not a thing!

Crossia: Oh really? Thats not what you told me in the living room.

An exclamation mark appeared above Luna's head and the blush on her face got more red.

Geo: What?

Crossia: Oh its simple actually, Luna here wants t-

Luna: NO ITS NOTHING REALLY!! DON'T LISTEN TO HER GEO I AM COMPLETELY SURE THAT I HAVE NOTHING ELSE
TO SAY RIGHT NOW!!

Geo: O..kay...

Luna: Well, I'll be leaving now! AND CROSSIA PLEASE DON'T SAY A WORD ABOUT IT TO GEO!!

Crossia: If you say so.

Luna: Alright, bye Geo! See you tomorrow~

Luna runs out of Geo's room and exits Geo's house completely.

Geo: What the heck was that all about?

Crossia: Nothing much, it has something to do with you though.

Geo: Me? What is it!?

Crossia: I can't tell! I promised Luna that I won't tell you.

Geo: ...Right...

Crossia: Well then, shouldn't we head downstairs for dinner?

Geo: Okay.

Geo and Crossia exits the room and heads downstairs, leaving it empty. The screen and music fades out
which marks this the end of the day. Well screw that, we're going to look at what happens the next day.
The screen fades in showing Geo at the front door of his house with Crossia.

Geo: Alright mom! We're leaving!

Hope: Okay! Please stay safe Geo!

Geo: I will!


Location: Echo Ridge -- Domain: Starforce -- Year: 220X -- BGM: 'RnR 2 - 02 - Home Town.mp3'


Geo: So then, what do you want to do today Crossia?

Crossia: Well, we could go have a look on Armos and Jakiro at the Inn.

Geo: Good idea! Lets go!

Geo and Crossia begins walking towards the Inn where Armos and Jakiro are at. They walk past the Big Wave
which has been closed for half a year. However, the door seems to be open and the two goes to inspect.

Geo: The Big Wave, it has been closed for 6 months now. I wonder where Ken has gone to.

Crossia: Probably in another region managing his other business there.

Geo: True. That may be possible.

Crossia: Hey Geo! Look at that!

Geo: What?

Crossia: The door!

Geo: Its... Open?

Crossia: Lets go check it out!

Geo: Okay...

The two walks to the entrance of Big Wave, standing in front of the main door of Big Wave.

Crossia: Its dark inside, I can't see anything from out here!

Geo: But the door is open, how wierd. Ken always turns the lights on when he opens the shop.

Crossia: Maybe he hasn't open it yet.

Geo: Hmm. Maybe. Yeah.

Crossia: Lets go in and check it out!

Geo: Okay.

The two walks into Big Wave, however, after they set foot into Big Wave, they noticed something that is
not right. Very not right. The area instantly turns into some sort of wave space, oh its not a wave space,
its a Time Warp? They entered another Time Warp? That wasn't in the script, but whatever.


Location: Space-Time Continuum Time Warp -- Domain: Unknown -- Year: Unknown -- BGM: 'ERH - Swell Pad.mp3'


Geo: What the heck!? This isn't Big Wave, its a Time Warp!!

Crossia: Oh noez! Without those two, we're going to be trapped in here. D:

Geo: Lets get out of here before...

Geo turns towards the opposite direction of he is facing, hoping to see the door which they came in from,
unfortunately they were...

Crossia: Too late.

Geo: Damn. Now what. I don't want to skip another day.

Crossia: Lets just try walking around, maybe we will find some kind of portal or something.

Geo: Well, alright. We need to get out of here ASAP, so lets find a portal or whatever.

Geo and Crossia kept walking for about 15 minutes in the Time Warp and found nothing that they were
expecting. They were about to abandon hope and sit down but they see something in front.

Crossia: Geo! Look at that!

Geo: What the, it looks like a... pyramid.

Crossia: What the heck is a pyramid doing here!?

Geo: Oh I know! We must have walked into a time area where pyramids existed! This could be bad! D:

Crossia: Don't copy my emotion!

Geo: Alright. :|

Crossia: Anyways, what does a pyramid being here mean?

Geo: Uhh... Didn't I just said that?

Crossia: I know, I meant in other terms.

Geo: Hmm...

Without thinking, Geo touches the pyramid and Geo sanked below the floor level. The floor is invisible
like a see-thru whatever, since there is nothing that can be seen in the Time Warp, the floor is not
visible which allows Crossia to see Geo going down. Geo and Crossia panics and Crossia grabs hold of
Geo and fells through the floor too.

Crossia: GEO!!!! NOOOOO!!!!

Geo: ARGH!! HELP MEE CHUCK NORRIS!!!!

Crossia: Hang on Geo! We are falling through time! I think!

Geo: ARGGGGHHHH!!!!

The two falls down, far far down below the floor level, they seem to be falling into infinity as seem
as it were space they are in. And suddenly the screen changes. Showing Echo Ridge!? WTF, thats not in
the script either! Whats going on here!? I'm going to have to contact Yandols later to explain this.
Anyways moving on, after the screen shows Echo Ridge, a portal appears from the sky and then Geo and
Crossia dropped down from the portal onto the ground.


Location: Echo Ridge -- Domain: Starforce -- Year: 3 years before 220X -- BGM: 'RnR 1 - 02 - Home Town.mp3'


Geo: Ah. Where are we?

Crossia: Home, it looks like it.

Geo: You mean we're in Echo Ridge?

Crossia: Look around.

Geo: You're right, but somethings not right.

Crossia: What do you mean?

Geo: Look, this place looks a bit different. Looks like before Echo Ridge gone through the renovations.

Crossia: Hmm, you know you do make a point.

Geo and Crossia walks towards Geo's house and on the way they saw Luna and the gang.

Crossia: Hey look its Luna and the gang!

Geo: Oh hi guys!

Luna, Bud and Zack walks right through Geo and Crossia as if they weren't even there! They also didn't saw
or hear what Geo and Crossia said.

Geo: What the? They went right through us!

Crossia: Are we in EM world?

Geo: I don't think so, if we were, how can you be beside me right now.

Crossia: Hmm you're right.

Geo: Well, lets see what the guys are up to.

Geo and Crossia walks closer towards Luna and the gang. They stop right in front of Geo's house, then Luna
drops her bag on the floor and begins to shout.

Luna: Hmph! Prepare yourself Geo Stelar! Today is the day you WILL go to school! I'm gonna make sure of it!
Rawr!!!

Bud: I can't believe this Geo guy, Luna comes to get him everyday, but nooo.

Geo and Crossia responds to what Luna shouted out, but nobody heard what they said.

Geo: What the? But its the middle of the vacation!

Crossia: That's what I thought too.

Luna walks up to Geo's door and prepares to ring the doorbell. But the door opened which surprised Luna.
And out of the door comes out... no way... another Geo Stelar!? And in a very unhappy mood aswell!

Geo: See ya later mom.

Luna: W-What!?

Hope: I know! I couldn't believe it either but he wanted to go to school today!

Geo and Crossia are surprised to see another Geo Stelar right in front of their eyes.

Geo: WHAT THE F!?!? IS THAT ME!?!?

Crossia: O___O Apparently it is!

Geo: What in the world is going on!

Crossia: I have no idea, but lets follow you!

Geo: You're right! Since they can't see us, its easier for us to track them!

Geo and Crossia follows the Geo Stelar that is heading towards school. The Geo that is currently unhappy
stopped right in front of the school gate and looked at his... TRANSER!?

Omega-Xis: Cool! So this is school?

Geo (Alt.): You saw it the other day from the wave road.

Omega-Xis: Yes, but I didn't cared then. NOW LETS GO!!

Geo (Alt.): Hey hey! Slow down!!

Geo and Crossia are again surprised, very surprised to see what happened there.

Geo: Is that a Transer!?

Crossia: It looks like it, you place that thing on your arm right.

Geo: Yeah, but that bulky old thing isn't used anymore now! That was like from like 3 years ago!

Crossia: Hmm... Do you think that we went back 3 years in time?

Geo: !!! Crossia!! You may be right! I didn't thought of that! But how did you...

Crossia: Well, you said that the Transer was used 3 years ago, so we must be in Echo Ridge 3 years ago!

Geo: Woah. But then, how the heck are we going to get outta here!?

Crossia: Good question, I'll get back to you on that. Meanwhile, lets keep tracking them!

Geo: Right into the school?

Crossia: Yes! Why not!? I haven't came down to earth yet at this time right?

Geo: Well yeah, I think this is the time where I just met Omega-Xis.

Crossia: This might be a good time for me to observe what you were doing before I came to earth!

The two characters follows the Geo Stelar from the past into the school and into Geo's classroom. Since
nobody was able to interact with the two of them, they were in the Geo's classroom watching Geo from behind.
They are not used to being totally invisible you know. Anyways, they saw Geo talking to his Transer.

Geo (Alt.): I brought you to school like you wanted so just be quiet okay?

Omega-Xis: Not a problem.

Geo: Oh I remember this!

Crossia: What?

Geo: Omega-Xis was annoying me very much that I couldn't concentrate in class. >__>

Crossia: Really? How?

Geo: Well, just watch.

Crossia: Oh yeah! I forgot. XD

The two continues watching, or should I say, monitoring the classroom.

Teacher: Well as I live and breathe, all of us are here for once! Now Geo, if you have any questions
just ask a classmate alright?

Geo (Alt.): Kay...

Teacher: Luna, you look after him.

Luna (Alt.): Right! I sure will!

Teacher: Excellent, then lets begin class!

--5 minutes later--

Teacher: Chapter 2, the pool of tears, curiouser and curiouser, the....

Omega-Xis: This is getting boring.

Geo (Alt.): Shhh!!! Quiet!

--15 minutes later--

Teacher: A ratio is simply a mathematical....

Omega-Xis: I'm really getting bored here.

Geo (Alt.): Will you be quiet?

--30 minutes later--

Teacher: Only the capital city has....

Omega-Xis: THIS IS EVEN MORE BORING THAN THE BOREDOM THAT BORED ME AT YOUR HOUSE!! ARGH IS THE WHOLE
PLANET THIS BORING!? THE SCHOOL IS THE MOST BORING PLACE OF EXISTANCE!!

Geo (Alt.): Hey, you promised to be quiet Omega-Xis.

Omega-Xis: THATS IT!!

Omega-Xis jumps out of the Transer in EM form and surprised Geo and caused him to minor shout. Fortunately
no-one was able to see Omega-Xis, except for our two heroes at the back of the classroom.

Geo (Alt.): AHHH!!!

Teacher: You have something to ask Geo?

Geo (Alt.): No! Nothing, I'm sorry ma'am.

Finally, our two heroes started talking to each other in discussion about what happened.

Crossia: So that was what happened when you brought Omega-Xis to school 3 years ago.

Geo: Uhuh. He annoyed the crap outta me. He wanted me to bring him to school but then he ran away
because he said it was boring there. -__-

Crossia: Lol.

Another 10 minutes later, Geo and Crossia walked out of the classroom and walked around the school, and
ended up seeing the Geo from the past.

Geo (Alt.): Argh, thats just great. Where's Omega-Xis gone to now!? -__-

Luna (Alt.): What are you doing here Geo?

The Geo from the past sees Bud carrying a shitload of books.

Geo (Alt.): Uh...

Luna (Alt.): Notes from all the classes you missed. I just didn't want you to fall behind.

Geo (Alt.): But I did all the schoolwork at home already!

Bud (Alt.): Hey are you rejecting Luna's Kindness!?

Geo (Alt.): NO!! Thats not what I was saying!!

Luna (Alt.): I bet you're just confused since you have been gone for so long. After all, there was so
much construction on the campus while you were away. It must look strange to you.

Geo (Alt.): Uh...

Luna grabbed hold of Geo's hand and took him away from where he was, bringing him to another area of the
school.

Luna (Alt.): So, let me show you around!

Geo (Alt.): Huh!? Wait!!

Crossia: So thats how it happened huh.

Geo: Huh? What?

Crossia: So its love upon first sight huh?

Geo: What? What are you talking about?

Crossia: She's holding your hand as if you were lovers even though you guys just met each other! Its
obvious that she already liked you at that time! And you hesitated to get her hand off!

Geo: ......

Crossia: Oh come on! I didn't said too much didn't I?

Geo: I was hoping that you didn't misunderstood that scene, but... ......

Crossia: Oh cheer up. Tell you what, I'm done touring your past. Lets find a way to return to the present!

Geo: Well yeah, we should really find a way to return to our time.

Crossia: First, lets get back to Echo Ridge.

Geo: We are at Echo Ridge...

Crossia: I meant like out of the school?

Geo: Oh yes of course. I knew that.

Crossia: Right... Anyway lets go!

Geo: Alright.

And so, our two heroes exited from the school campus and returned to Echo Ridge, walking around town trying
to find a way to return to the present. However, my battery is about to run out, so I'm going to save the
game first......... Okay done. So, lets continue next time, I gotta charge my DS and I'm too tired to
continue reading the story watever. Okay, screen fades out to black, which marks the end of this chapter.


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Post by Nirvaxstiel » Sat Jul 31, 2010 9:35 pm

Nice! If possible I'll make the game with ya =D

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Post by nopihina » Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:39 pm

hmm... Nice plot CS but here are some of my advices. I think i read fan fiction too much :unsure: .

-Umm.. do not I mean DO NOT mention can be seen through the default view and camera things. Like "In somewhere that looks like a top of a building, a man in red clothing can be seen through default view,looking away from the camera (you know, RnR camera). Then some sort of demon with wings entered the visible view of the camera and walked towards the man in red. The demon speaks."
Change it something like this : Inside a top building in 20XX, a man in red clothing is standing, doing nothing. Footsteps of a demon can be heard behind the man. The demon finally spoke, "Hey!"
-Do not put "An exclamation mark appeared above the man's head" stuff like that change it to : "The man jumped in shocked a bit, not knowing there was someone behind him"
-Please do not put Press R button and Music play as music dont play out of nowhere in real life XD . Well if in the year 220X do then go ahead do it...
-Pretend you are writing an must work hard 5000 word essay
I'm gonna make an edit of a scene in ur chapter 1...

Inside a top building in 20XX, a man in red clothing is standing, doing nothing. Footsteps of another person can be heard behind the man. It finally spoke, "Hey!" . The man jumped in shocked a bit, not knowing there was someone behind him. He turns to see the nothing but a demon. "Oh hey Armos!" the red man said.

Hope that would help you.

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Post by Nirvaxstiel » Mon Aug 02, 2010 2:27 am

ow... a long peace of advice.

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Post by CHM-Mayune » Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:17 am

In my long terms of writing fan-fics... I'd say, if I were CS, I would use Nopeh's advice and improve on my writing.

The plot was good, but the writing could be improved. Using quotation marks really helps, but I could edit the whole chapter for you.
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Inside a top building in 20XX, a man in red clothing is standing, doing nothing. Footsteps of another person can be heard behind the man.

It finally spoke, "Hey!" The man jumped in shocked a bit, not knowing there was someone behind him. He turns to see the nothing but a demon.

"Oh hey Armos!" the red man said.

Armos looks around the surrounding and then begins a conversation. "I see you've cleared the place up." he said.

"Yup, I'm all packed up and ready to go." The man said.

"So you really are moving... But where to?" Armos asked, not changing his emotions.

"I'm heading... to the year 220X." The man said.

After a few seconds of hearing that, Armos' face changed into a surprise and continues the conversation.

"2-220X!?" Armos said, still in shock. "But its only the year 200X!! You're going to about 200 years into the future!?" He added.

"Exactly. The year 220X is my destination." The man said.

"But... but... how is it even possible to travel through time!?" Armos asked.

"Heh. Follow me, and I'll show you."

"..."

The man in red takes 4 steps to the left, 6 steps up, 4 steps to the right, and 2 more steps up. A "..."
icon appeared above Armos' head for 1.25 seconds and then he follows the man in red. Then Armos continues the conversation

"..." Armos just stared at it. "I don't see anything... Besides the stars, of course." He added.

"Heh, Watch this!" The man exclaimed with a smirk on his face.

Then something blinded them for a short moment. Then an orb appeared out of nowhere in the middle of the sky.

"W-What is that!?" Armos shrieked, then he looks at the orb, taking a few steps away.

"This my friend, is the Time Orb. I found this about a week ago. During that time, I studied this orb
and found out that it has an amazing power." The man said. "He who possesses this orb, can travel across time." He explained philosophically.

Armos is shocked about this and he turned to the man in red.

"But... you might alter the space-time continuum and cause a time paradox!" He exclaimed.

"That is the least of my worries." The man said, still looking at the orb.

"..."

Armos turns back towards the sky and the man in red continues.

"I learnt from the orb, that the year 220X is very interesting. Especially with the technology they have." The man said. "I am also aware that I might cause a time paradox when I go to that year. But it is more interesting
to see what kind of time paradoxes can occur because of me."

Armos turns towards the man in red. "So you are going to change the future?" He asked.

The man in red turns towards Armos. "Not exactly, but possibly." He replied. "If you want to, you can come along with me."

Both of them then turns towards the sky.

"..." Armos just stared, thinking. "I dunno... But I would also like to see how the future looks like." He finally said.

"If you want to follow, then go home and pack your stuff! I'm leaving for the future in a few hours." The man exclaimed the middle of the sentence then returned to the original tone. "I'm heading to the Inn for awhile. In the meantime, think about it, Armos."

The man in red then slowly walks away. Armos then turns towards the sky and looks at the Time Orb.
And the 220X timeline will be on your own to edit it, since if I edited it, I would use Japanese names.

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Post by Yandols » Sat Aug 07, 2010 8:05 pm

Thanks for the feedback you guys, but i intentionally but it that way. Because the narrator speaking is a character, not just a static narrator.
-Do not put "An exclamation mark appeared above the man's head" stuff like that change it to : "The man jumped in shocked a bit, not knowing there was someone behind him"
Well, I added that because System was referring to the "game camera".

Yeah, this might be complicating to understand, but this is a new "style" im testing on.

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Post by Yandols » Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:04 pm

Chapter 3 has been released!
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